I moved “Ronald & Cynthia” from “Works in Progress” to “Fiction.” I still consider it an early draft, and I’m hoping to get feedback about it from class over the next couple weeks. Because of its length (just under 3800 words, about 13 double-spaced pages) I’ll share the first part tonight and the second half next week.
Now that I have some distance from it, I see that the end is somewhat rushed. I look forward to seeing what three fresh pairs of eyes have to say (and suddenly I have this image of eyeballs, splitting open, and a tongue sticking out; this means I’ve had too much coffee or not enough).
Perfect Sand 